Thursday, October 3, 2013
Monday late starts VS. Tuesdat late starts
Monday late starts Vs. Tuesday late starts Monday late starts are better than Tuesday late starts. Students are usually really tired on Mondays, and with the Monday late starts you get to sleep in. Its perfect! You get to ease into the week. Also, everyone ends the school day at the same time which is really nice. Another great thing is if you don't have a sport after school, you can talk to teachers because they wont have an A period after school. On the other hand, Tuesday late starts are better than Monday late starts because sometimes it's nice to get out early. If you have a sport after school and you don't have an A period, then you can relax for an hour before you have to go run or swim or whatever you have to do. the is a great time to catch up on some homework. But again if you don't have an A period or a sport you can get out early. Overall, Monday late starts are better than Tuesday late starts.
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The first sentence of this post seems redundant and confusing you say "Monday vs. Tuesday late start" twice and do not end the sentence, which leads it immediately into the next sentence, which is very difficult to read. Not to be super critical, but you also spelled the first Tuesday wrong. I think you could have used a little better diction (ie: whatever, like, really). But other than that I think you have some excellent points as to why Monday late starts are better than Tuesday late starts, so good job.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your imput. It was really helpful. Your right I should read over my blog more carefully next time
DeleteHi Brianna and Galen.
ReplyDeleteI love this exchange! Galen you gave Brianna helpful feedback in a positive way, and Brianna you thanked her for her insight and learned something for next time. What a perfect example of what this blog is all about!
Keep it up girls.
-Ms. Harper